Great catchlights. I do find the blown spot on the right bottom corner to be a bit too much. Perhaps you can recrop to get rid of it.
-El mommy to B & A
Just chug-chug-chugging along.
I agree w/ El ... really great catchlights, but the blown spot at the bottom is a tad distracting. A slight crop and you've got a real winner here!
Im seeing some improvement here! nice job! The girls have already given some good cc, so Ill leave it at that!