You up for it??? If not, I understand!
I realize there are quite a bit, so if you only want to do a few thats fine.
1. f/3.2, 1/640 (could have lowered ISO) ISO-800
2. f/3.5, 1/640, ISO-400
3. stats are wiped out on this one. I bet f/3.2 SS- 150+
4. f/3.2, ISO-400, SS 1/160
5. stats wiped out
6. f/5.6, ISO-800, SS-1/200
Is the colors on this one right?? Something is way off, but I can't figure it out...
7. Something off here too...any help?
Hey there! I only have a quick second, so I will just do first impressions. Dont I dont intend to sound harsh!
1. very unflattering pose, wide stripes, combined with smooshed up pose combined with reflection... Also appears under-exposed and off on color
2 adorable face! Wish we had more eye contact or interaction with wagon or book, not sure how they tell the story here...
3 another cutie! skin tones seem green and edit feels a tad bright
4 better than 1, watch for dappled light on base of dress... also seems soft
5 not loving the elbow chops here, but good light in her eyes
6 color is waaay off, spots are blown and lots of chopped feet... but nice lifestyle feel
7 super green little one... also appears over exposed...
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I'm on my laptop and it's not recently calibrated, so I can't comment on color so much.
1 Is Ok, I like what you were going for. I know I said I wasn't going to comment on color, but her face looks like it has a blue cast.
2 That boy is adorable, but I have to agree with the above on wanting to see more of what's in his hands.
4 Wish she had stood up a bit more, maybe put her shoulders back a bit? I think that would have made it a bit better
5 Cute, but it doesn't quite look like you have full eye contact
6 I'm afraid this one looks a bit too snap shotty...maybe if you had gotten a bit lower it would have been a better angle.
7 This one seems way too bright and yellow
I think you are doing great and love seeing you post!
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2. I will work on the hands and show you the whole one, but the reason I cropped it like it is, is b/c his pants did something weird and they look almost like a skirt?!?!
7. doesn't look this bad on my computer, but I knew there was something up. Will work on it too.
Sadie, really nice shots! I think you've already gotten some great CC, but just wanted to say I love #3 and #4. (I used to be a pretty heavy girl, and I'm pretty sure I wouldn't have been happy seeing myself in #1, but #4 is lovely. Genuine smile and very attractive and flattering!)
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You already got great cc, but just wanted to add that for me, most of these just look over-edited, and a few look muddy/not sharp (?). I do really like 3, 4, and 5. But in #5 her eyes look too white and her shirt looks blown.
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Sadie, I think the contrast/blacks might be too high in both the pics of the little boy...?
I really like 4 a lot, and think she will, too - I see improvement everytime you post pics...thanks for the motivation to get to work!