These are very nice... she sure is a gorgeous girl!
The toning on #1 looks so off to me, though the shot itself is great. I don't know... I looked at it on our TV and it was gorgeous, but the other images looked off on the TV; whereas on our computer (which I think is closer to proper calibration) the first one looks off, but the others look much better.
Love #3 and #8. Some other others still look a bit dark to me.
I was wishing in #3 and #5 to see a full shot with her boots, but then in #7 with the bright sun to the left of the shed, I see why you didn't do that more. But somehow the chops, where they are, seem not quite right.
I looked on my phone and they are very dark but on my computer they look right? Yes you are correct I had her at the edge of a shadow so if I got the boots then the pic was half shadow/ half sun. We shot at 4-4:30 but it was still way too bright. I have alot more of this set that are not in the same spot so hopefully the crops will not look off in those They are almost a tad too bright on my computer? weird