My session yesterday with Karlee:) ADDED 7 MORE FROM THIS SET.

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tialee80's picture
Joined: 02/04/12
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My session yesterday with Karlee:) ADDED 7 MORE FROM THIS SET.

Finally we had a warm day:) (no heated snuggie needed lol) Her mom had to work late but did not want to cancel so I picked Karlee up and went for shakes (you know the whole warming up thing) then went thru the wardrobe I brought, picked outfits, and began shooting. I downloaded Justin beiber to my phone and I shot her as I showed her my awesome dance moves lol not really!
Anyhow here are some from yesterday.

1 karlee (2 of 5)

1 karlee (1 of 5)

1 karlee1 (1 of 1)

1 karlee4 (1 of 1)

1 karlee6 (1 of 1)

1 karlee7 (1 of 1)

Looks off kinda??? Still have to fix this one

1 karlee5 (1 of 1)

THIS PIC IS ALL OFF JUST WANTED TO CROP IN AND SHOW YOU HOW WELL THE CHAIR PHOTOGRAPHS:)

1 karlee8 (1 of 1)

SOME MORE FROM THE SET. DO THESE CROPS BOTHER YOU? IF SO HOW WOULD YOU CHANGE IT? THANKS
1.
karlee picks2 (1 of 1)

2.
karlee picks4 (1 of 1)

3.
karlee picks5 (1 of 1)

4.
karlee picks (1 of 1)

5.
karlee picks10 (1 of 1)

6. NOT SURE IF I LIKE THIS ONE OR NOT?

karlee picks3 (1 of 1)

7.
karlee picks1 (1 of 1)

Ladybugsteph's picture
Joined: 06/21/06
Posts: 2977

I only have time for some general CC (BTW, Everyone: Sorry I haven't been around much! Life, you know?)

Overall, I feel these need warmed up, and you need to watch your chops. Make sure head chops look intentional, not accidental (just the top part of the head/hat), and that you're not chopping off at a joint. Try to keep the flow of the eye going by keeping the joints from being cropped.

Amy_&_Eva's picture
Joined: 08/23/07
Posts: 2378

Very cute! Not sure if you were wanting any CC, but #1 and #5 are a bit too cool. I like all of these really, the last one just needs light in her eyes, and that converted one I would like to see in an all-the-way B&W (it seems to still have the slightest bit of pink I think). I think my favorite is #5 although I would like it backed up/less cropped a bit.

EL2
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Joined: 12/05/07
Posts: 1665

I agree with both CC. The crops look really tight. Is there anyway you can give more of the background - where it'll add more to the picture? There are some bright spots on a couple of them. You might want to make sure your whites aren't blown.

tialee80's picture
Joined: 02/04/12
Posts: 394

Thanks girls. I will add more from the set that do not have such a close crop. Thank Steph, that was a great way to put it. My eye instantly stops on 5 6 and 7 and I am thinking I should also go a little higher on 2. I still keep getting motion blur when zoomed out wide so I think I have been zooming in tight to aviod that but wow I just noticed how bad some of these crops were. I have some better ones I will add a little later:)

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Joined: 03/13/08
Posts: 2119

I think you got some great CC, not much to add you did great.