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    Default ok.. "floating belly" .. how's this??

    If ya'll are getting tired of me posting just say so..lol.. I'm trying to get these right and love all the feedback! Very helpful! So I went back and re-edited the "floating belly" one both in black and white and color b/c everyone seemed to agree that the color version was way too cool. So I warmed it up a little and played with a color balance layer (new to me, so feel free to suggest tweaks if you see anything obvious!)... Do these look better?

    1st edit -too cool, need tighter crop
    IMG_6570

    new color edit - warmer + color balance + tighter crop
    IMG_6570-cb

    1st b/w edit- "floating belly"
    IMG_6570-2

    new b/w edit - any better? should I crop it tighter like the other one?
    IMG_6570-3

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    still floating to me. I can see the lighter fabric when I inspect really closely...but it's still floating on normal viewing.

    oh, and I think the color version may still be too cool.
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    Hope you don't mind my plays.

    Color needed warmth and I would have extended the canvas rather than crop in tighter:

    464color

    The black and white I played with the midtones a bit more to bring out more lightness because there is a lot of dark happening - to distract from the floating:

    464bw

    These plays are from your jpegs and would have been better if I had the raw images but you get the idea.


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