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    Default One from a maternity session yesterday.. Does it work?

    I had a maternity session yesterday, these guys are awesome people. really friendly

    Anyway I passed on this initially as it was initially a portrait shot where Mum was watching their 2 year old behind me.

    Then I decided to play and crop it to this way, I then extended the canvas to make the composition a little more interesting.

    I would love to know what you think? I know, the hand chop is there unfortunatly can't change it.

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    I was sorta 'iffy' on it but when i took your pic and transformed it to b/w just to see if i liked that better...i think i really prefer it in b/w. Hope you don't mind Some pics just work better in b/w and i think this is one of them.
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    Doesn't work at all for me. The hand chop especially just makes me think...why in the world do we have all that black space and not all of the subject.
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    I'm kind of with Amber on this one. I think there's a bit too much space on the right side. Also, if you do use this one, you might want to clean up by dad's chest a bit. Looks a little bluish instead of black.
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    I do wish the hand were showing, but it's not a deal breaker for me. What is a little off (probably just something only I would think) is that I wish I could see more of the top of the dad's jeans/pants. It just appears as though he is naked
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