playing with sparklers!

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playing with sparklers!

All sooc. I was going to play around with them but I kinda like how the first 2 came out I just wish I would have got some more light in her eyes.
With the 2 heart pics, I like 1 and dh likes the other so I need your help. In both sets which one would you pick?
1 or 2 and then 3or4? Or should I try again and if so any ideas on how I could make it better?
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Also, is the hand chop bothering you? Should I just crop out her whole hand?

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Very cool, I like them!

The only thing I'd really say is that the sparkler seems to be too centered. I think having a little more of the top of her head showing, and more of her left shoulder, with the sparkler more in the "intersection" line of the thirds in the left bottom corner, might be a bit better.

The hand chop doesn't bother me.

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Cute! I did some sparkler stuff last 4th of July, and had so much fun!

Between the first 2, I like #2 better. Her eyes look weird, in the first because there's no light in them, and with it being up-lit from the sparkler.

Between the last 2, I choose #3 because it has all of the heart in it.

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Of the first set I like #1 better because there is that eye contact.
The second set is a tough one for me I really like that you got the whole heart in #1 but #2 you've captured the girls along with the heart so it really depends what you are going for.