If I am posting too much, please, please say so. I feel guilty, but I love the CC and plus, looking at them here, helps me get a second look. So, if you have time and are willing- please CC. I have my big girl pants on.
This one was for a co-worker. I am competing against a good photographer in the area, and I feel like I failed. I got some keepers, but the lady who usually does hers is quite a bit better......
ALL ISO-400, except for #4
1. 1/400, f/4.0
3-5x7b&wweb by sadiequalls, on Flickr
2. They really wanted a fam photo, and I am saddened by what I got. Big sis is looking uncomfortable and well, both sisters are....
fam2-5x7web by sadiequalls, on Flickr
3. 1/640, f/4.5 (should have opened up more....)
j4-8x10-closeupweb by sadiequalls, on Flickr
4. 1/320, f/4.0, ISO-640
sisters5x7web by sadiequalls, on Flickr
5. 1/250, f/3.2
k3b&wweb by sadiequalls, on Flickr
6. 1/125, f/3.5
z3-5x7wweb by sadiequalls, on Flickr
I think they look pretty great!!! I seriously ADORE #5, that looks sooooooo good Sadie!!! Everything about it.
I agree the sisters look awkward in the fam photo but otherwise it's good! that little boy sure does like to use his mouth doesn't he lol!
In #1 the right side is very dark. But that's my 2nd fave photo!!
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These are really nice Sadie.
Here are my ccs:
1 - very nice. wish the little girl was looking but I know how that goes. The big kid, looks a bit dark - brighten that side up a bit.
2 - looks good. but crop is a bit tight.
3 - Looks nice - again wish he was looking, but you've captured a cute expression nonetheless.
4 - again crop is too tight, you cropped off their knees, color looks nice - need to pop it a bit.
5 - cute - conversion is not working for me
6 - my fav - looks nice, comp, color, etc.
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I think you did a nice job!
#1 camera right side of big sis face is a bit dark.
#2 I probably would have gotten Mom and Dad to kneel down. That way there isn't so much 'blank' space between the girls and parents.
#3 Cute, but I'd find a different way to crop this one. My eye keeps going to the puff ball on the hat instead of the boy.
#4 Love their smiles! But, not thrilled with the crop. I'd probably crop it tighter if you didn't get their whole bodies in the shot.
#5 Very cute
#6 I like the crop!
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I think they are good overall!
1 - love it, but wish the older sister weren't so dark
2 - love the background colors, but wish there wasn't so much space between the mom and dad and girls
3 - 6 love all of them....the crop on 5 is a bit tight, but not bad!
Ok, I took all of your advice, and I willd o my best to upload them tomorrow.
1- I did *try* to fix her face on #1. I can't do the best job b/c I suck at editing, but I will share.
2- I have a different family pic that I will share as well. They are all together on a blanket, but the youngest aren't looking, but they are laughing. Dad's face has some dappled light, but it is better than the one I posted.
3- I have no clue why I shared that crop...geez. I have a better one and I will share it now since it is in my flickr. Is this one better? Too centered?
j4-5x7 by sadiequalls, on Flickr
4- It was crooked, so I had to straighten it which lost most of my room on the sides, but I did find another one where I could keep their legs.
5- still wasn't sold on the conversion, I'll try again.
Thanks ladies. I really like getting feedback b/c it makes me take another look. I hope I can fix all these!