poem I wrote to share

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mommyx6's picture
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poem I wrote to share

A minute

I knew for a min
as you grew each day
I didn't know that min was just a short stay
but in that min
I felt your presence long
and if I knew you longer
the pain would be to strong
for the min was so brief
a min is not to long
a min is all I get
as a mother to this wrong
for God took you in a min
for him to hold so dear
for it wasn't ment for me
to keep you so near.

Poem bye Becky Witek

Joined: 03/16/15
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That was beautiful..Thanks for sharing.

Robin

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Thank you for letting me share.

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that is truly beautiful.

shelly

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That is amazing and it gave me goosebumps - it just created emotions, with every word and I truly feel for you.

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Thank you.I might submit it and see what they say.