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    Another couple done for Caleigh's NICU book! Woot!




    And here's the one I posted for the "loving you" challenge. I'm really not very good with word art. Anyone wanna play with it? I almost feel like the page is too simple, but don't know if more elements would take away from the picture.




    ETA: I played with it some more. What do you think, is this one better?

    loving you until 2 jpg
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    What program do you use? I'd love to play with the wordart for you. i like the simplicity of the first one. I think the wordart needs to be a little bit fancier.

    ETA: i love the first one!! I also love the picture on the second page. so sweet!

    ETA: ok here is my take on the wordart, not really a different layout, but i used a different font, color and shadow. Please don't feel bad if you don't like it.

    download here (it is a png file) the preview looks funky on the website, but i promise it's cute lol
    http://www.4shared.com/file/82509397...oving_you.html

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    oooh! Very nice Beth!!! in regards the second one.... i like the first one better... (in the last one with the birdie, my attention gets diverted to the paper and our feathery friend - so in the first one, the focus is on your little one)... just my opinion.
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    Quote Originally Posted by InspiredHeartDesigns View Post
    What program do you use? I'd love to play with the wordart for you. i like the simplicity of the first one. I think the wordart needs to be a little bit fancier.
    I can use pngs or jpgs. But not photoshop files.

    It would be awesome if you want to play around! I'd welcome anyone who wants to make a go of it! I think mine is just too plain and boring.

    Quote Originally Posted by LindieLu View Post
    oooh! Very nice Beth!!! in regards the second one.... i like the first one better... (in the last one with the birdie, my attention gets diverted to the paper and our feathery friend - so in the first one, the focus is on your little one)... just my opinion.
    That's what I was worried about. Thanks for sharing your thoughts!
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    I love them!! But I do agree that the first take of the second one is best. The bird does take some of the focus away from sweet Caleigh. The simplicity makes her the focus.

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    love the stretch, too cute!!! and I like the loving you without the bird. but that bird is adorable!
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    You've gotten great advice so far, so I won't go there. But they are both cute. I am loving all of your NICU pages..they are great!
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    i love love love the stretch one.
    and i agree with PP.... the first of the Loving You one is the best!
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    They look great. I think I like your original on the 2nd one better than the new one. I think the journaling block detracts from the gorgeous picture. I love that your hand is in the picture so you can tell just how tiny she is.

    The first one looks great. So much like you style, love it!
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    So precious. I really like the second, second layout.
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