Angel Eyes: opinions wanted! *update

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Princess Leia's picture
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Angel Eyes: opinions wanted! *update

So this was my original and I wasn't happy with it.

Took some suggestions and came up with this

What do you think? better? worse? suggestions for further improvement? I've never been so indecisive about a page. :rolleyes:

update:
attempt #3

auret's picture
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Hmmm ....

I do like the second one better.

But I think it might look better with a solid paper? And how about rearranging a little bit and putting Scout in the lower right of the page. Maybe flip your image so she's looking out of the page to the left. It's a great picture that shows off those pretty blues, but it's got an odd direction to it. Does that make sense?

Good luck! You'll know it when you get it right. Smile

K9Trainer's picture
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I like the second better, but not sure why. Guess the placement of the journaling, and also the way it draws my eyes, the whole LO in general.

BabiesRBlessings's picture
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I like the first one better. I don't like how the picture is cut so close to her face in the second one.

Uropachild's picture
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Yeah, i think i like the first one better too. The second pic is too close up iykwim? It's like my eyes can't take it all in cause she's too close...

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I like the placement of the title in the second one. In the first I feel like its tattood onto her forehead almost. Maybe try the not so close up picture and just move the ANgel eyes title. Its a great LO though, I love the pic you are using.

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I like the second one better, but I think Beth has a good suggestion with the solid paper and maybe switching it so she's at the bottom? If she was at the bottom too you could make her a bit smaller and fit the title and journalling at the top?

Princess Leia's picture
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played some more... posted in OP

slurpeegirl13's picture
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I think I like the last one the best! The green really makes her eyes pop that much more! Smile

That's such a pretty picture of Scout!

auret's picture
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Definitely enjoy the last one the best! The title doesn't detract from Scout. And the green really does help her eyes pop out even more!

How do you like it? Are you content with it yet?

Andy1784's picture
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I love the third version. Its a really pretty LO, but then again its hard to go wrong with such a cute subject.

Cherrykitten's picture
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I like #3 the best!! The colors complement the photo better and don't seem to wash her out as much

Uropachild's picture
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OOO yes! #3 is the best!! Biggrin

MommyCB's picture
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You hit the spot with number 3! The colors enhance her eyes and help the whole theme to be brought together! it's a keeper!

Princess Leia's picture
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Still not 100% on it but I like it much better this way... still feel like it's missing something...

coolmama72's picture
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I have no ideas. Sad I think the picture is very sweet and the green actually brings out her eyes more. But I'm kinda with you, I feel like something is missing but I don't know what. However, it is very sweet like it is - I say save it and move to the next project as it does look good. Smile