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    This is the practice run for T.J.'s birthday invitation. It didn't scan well due to the vellum overlay but you can get the idea. I like the vellum in person. Upon scanning I noticed that I should probably ink the stem and leaves because they didn't show up well. Any comments and criticism is appreciated because these will be going out to people and I don't want it to look stupid.

    Here is what it will say:
    We're Buggin' Because
    T.J.'s Turning Two

    On Saturday the 10th of May
    Come to our party so we can play
    At 2 o'clock you should BUZZ on by
    To eat some WORMS or catch a
    BUTTERFLY
    We'll be serving DIRT and Bar-BEE-Q
    It will be lots of fun, hope to see you.

    (Address at bottom)

    Last edited by MinaAriel; 04-07-2008 at 10:54 PM. Reason: To add invite wording
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    i personally love them and think they are great.
    i agree that you should prob ink the stem and leaves.

    are you putting the invite part on the vellum or the underneath w the bugs etc?
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    That is awesome!!! I LOVE it!!! I agree that inking the tree edges would bring it out, but other then that i say don't change a thing! i love it!

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    Quote Originally Posted by mommy2007 View Post
    i personally love them and think they are great.
    i agree that you should prob ink the stem and leaves.

    are you putting the invite part on the vellum or the underneath w the bugs etc?
    Do you mean the party details? I will be printing those on the back in plain white with maybe a few tiny bug accents. I'm still trying to work on what it will say. I want it to be kinda cutesy.
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    wow, those are going to be AWESOME! I bet everyone that gets one is going to say something to you. Too cute. I really don't think you need to change a thing.
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    Quote Originally Posted by mommy2007 View Post
    i personally love them and think they are great.
    i agree that you should prob ink the stem and leaves.
    I agree!! Really cute idea!
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    I love it! I think it looks great!

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    Oh wow!! I love the way you did the information!!! I am a big fan of rhyme - and yours is so awesome!! Did you make it up or did you see it someplace else?
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    love the rhyming details.... great job!!!

    i'm sure you'll get lots of compliments.
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    oh, I love it!

    tell me about the dirt you're serving.
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