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    Default Can you take a quick peek? - new version post 15

    I wanted to get this printed ... but am not sure how I feel about it. Mainly, does the embellishment on the bottom left look stupid? This is for the DH challenge, and I'm dying to get it printed. But I wanted some other eyes on it first. Is there anything that jumps out as being off? I already added the apostrophe in "Andrew's" - the font I used didn't have an apostrophe and I didn't notice until I uploaded it.

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    I think the emblie in the left corner looks out of place. Not sure if this is possible as I don't digiscrap but the rope behind the pictures can you have it curve instead of just go straight down? If it could I think that would fill the void and look nice.

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    Not stupid, but a little glittery for a man, iykwim.

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    I actually like the design on the left. It ties the round frame together. I would love to get a page done for this challenge, because I could double-duty it as a Christmas gift for DH.

    Great layout btw!
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    I think it looks great!
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    It does look slightly out of place, but it ties into the frame on the bottom right... What if you made it slightly bigger and a little translucent. Then shift the ropes over a little so they cover it a little bit. I dunno, just a thought that you might play with.

    I love the journaling and those are such sweet pictures. And wow! hubba hubba!!!


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    Thanks for the feedback. I wish I could change the ropes but I don't know how to do that. It was a challenge just to get them overlapped the way I did. I had a lot of trial and error with it. I was thinking of replacing the embellishment on the left with more things to thank DH for. I emailed him a copy of it tonight (I went out with my girl friends so I wasn't here to actually show him) and he really liked it. But I think I want to tweak it some more before I print it.

    And I know the glitter isn't so manly, but I still like it.
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    I think it's really sweet. I like the left embellishment a lot. Got any paper copies? lol. Glad your hubby liked it to. You have some really cute photos on there
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    I like it, I think the embellishment looks good there since it matches the frame on the other side. It is very sweet!
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    I agree that the embellishment adds to it just right. I didn't even notice it till someone said something about it. And I LOVE the glitter. I LOVE the whole page..it's awesome!!
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