I wanted to get this printed ... but am not sure how I feel about it. Mainly, does the embellishment on the bottom left look stupid? This is for the DH challenge, and I'm dying to get it printed. But I wanted some other eyes on it first. Is there anything that jumps out as being off? I already added the apostrophe in "Andrew's" - the font I used didn't have an apostrophe and I didn't notice until I uploaded it.
Last edited by coolmama72; 11-25-2009 at 06:56 PM.
I think the emblie in the left corner looks out of place. Not sure if this is possible as I don't digiscrap but the rope behind the pictures can you have it curve instead of just go straight down? If it could I think that would fill the void and look nice.
I love the page!
Daughter Rileigh Ann arriving January 2012
I actually like the design on the left. It ties the round frame together. I would love to get a page done for this challenge, because I could double-duty it as a Christmas gift for DH.
Great layout btw!
Kayson 10-9-06 & Cohen 02-08-10
I think it looks great!
It does look slightly out of place, but it ties into the frame on the bottom right... What if you made it slightly bigger and a little translucent. Then shift the ropes over a little so they cover it a little bit. I dunno, just a thought that you might play with.
I love the journaling and those are such sweet pictures. And wow! hubba hubba!!!
Thanks for the feedback. I wish I could change the ropes but I don't know how to do that. It was a challenge just to get them overlapped the way I did. I had a lot of trial and error with it. I was thinking of replacing the embellishment on the left with more things to thank DH for. I emailed him a copy of it tonight (I went out with my girl friends so I wasn't here to actually show him) and he really liked it. But I think I want to tweak it some more before I print it.
And I know the glitter isn't so manly, but I still like it.
I agree that the embellishment adds to it just right. I didn't even notice it till someone said something about it. And I LOVE the glitter. I LOVE the whole page..it's awesome!!
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