I hope it's okay for me to ask this. My DH is in the process of getting my hairbow website ready. We were hoping to have it ready to go today, but he's still adding stuff and I haven't been able to upload the actual pictures so I have some replacement pictures for the time being. Anyway, my DH created the about me page so that I could do a little write up. He's not very interested in reading it tonight because he wants to go to bed. Could you guys look over it and tell me if it sounds okay? The website is www.ribbonstobows.com (Please keep in mind that most of the site is not complete). Is the "about me" too wordy? Any suggestions? Thanks in advance.