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I like where this is going ...

... but I'm afraid it's not quite there yet. Any suggestions?

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looking at it again, I definately think the title needs to be larger.

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VERY nice! Im always impressed with people that have the patience to make a two page lo!! Just a few more touches and it will be perfect!

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I think you are "on a roll" and a few more embellishments and you'll be done! Great job!

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Oh how cute! I personally like the simplicity here. If you make the title bigger, I think it will be perfect.

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I think it looks great too! I love that you got the four shots showing the turn. That is priceless. I agree the title could be a bit bigger and I would probably add a couple of embellishments in the lower left corner. It's not really necessary but it might add a little 'something' if you feel it's too simple. But I think you did fantastic!

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I love it!! What a cutie.

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I agree about a larger title. But I'd also add the date on there somewhere, even if it's just really small. You know when he turned 4 months old, but others don't, and he might appreciate the date on the page when he's bigger. Wink

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Great pages! I wish I had thought of that...

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i think it looks great! i do agree that maybe the title should be bigger though

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I too like the simplicity of it. The title is too cute! Biggrin

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I agree with the others, making the title bigger - even if it's only the Roll part. I would also move it down a bit so it's right on top of the photos, maybe putting the "On a" on top of the "Roll" instead of to the left (just a suggestion, not sure how that would actually look) ... and adding a couple embellishments. If you only picked 2, you could submit it for the simplicity technique challenge! Smile

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I agree that simpler is better. Have you tried it with a bigger title?

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WOW! GREAT l/o! Other than a bigger title, I really wouldn't change a thing! THIS ROCKS!

Best,
GiGi

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"slurpeegirl13" wrote:

If you only picked 2, you could submit it for the simplicity technique challenge! Smile

I didn't see that challenge! I don't think it would be fair to submit this one though, since you all helped. I will sumbit something else.