... but I'm afraid it's not quite there yet. Any suggestions?
looking at it again, I definately think the title needs to be larger.
VERY nice! Im always impressed with people that have the patience to make a two page lo!! Just a few more touches and it will be perfect!
I think you are "on a roll" and a few more embellishments and you'll be done! Great job!
Oh how cute! I personally like the simplicity here. If you make the title bigger, I think it will be perfect.
I think it looks great too! I love that you got the four shots showing the turn. That is priceless. I agree the title could be a bit bigger and I would probably add a couple of embellishments in the lower left corner. It's not really necessary but it might add a little 'something' if you feel it's too simple. But I think you did fantastic!
I love it!! What a cutie.
I agree about a larger title. But I'd also add the date on there somewhere, even if it's just really small. You know when he turned 4 months old, but others don't, and he might appreciate the date on the page when he's bigger.
Great pages! I wish I had thought of that...
i think it looks great! i do agree that maybe the title should be bigger though
I too like the simplicity of it. The title is too cute!
I agree with the others, making the title bigger - even if it's only the Roll part. I would also move it down a bit so it's right on top of the photos, maybe putting the "On a" on top of the "Roll" instead of to the left (just a suggestion, not sure how that would actually look) ... and adding a couple embellishments. If you only picked 2, you could submit it for the simplicity technique challenge!
I agree that simpler is better. Have you tried it with a bigger title?
WOW! GREAT l/o! Other than a bigger title, I really wouldn't change a thing! THIS ROCKS!
If you only picked 2, you could submit it for the simplicity technique challenge!
I didn't see that challenge! I don't think it would be fair to submit this one though, since you all helped. I will sumbit something else.