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    Ok ladies. I am working on T.J.'s birthday invites. I figure I should do the mock-up now since his brother will be here right about the time they will need to go out. This is my first draft of what the invites will say. I think it needs a little work.

    So far I am doing a tent shaped invite. This will be printed in the middle of the invite.

    Step right up! Come one, Come all
    To T.J.’s Birthday Carnival!
    Our big boy is turning 3
    And you’re invited to the party!
    On May the 9th the fun begins
    With games and prizes, everyone wins!
    It’s at 2 o’clock so don’t be late,
    In joining us to celebrate!

    Please help.
    Nancy
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    I really like it. And I may end up borrowing it, if it's okay with you, since Patricks birthday will be circus themed (yess there will be clowns involved for those of you afraid of clowns, I will put warnings)
    Erin~Mommy to Patrick and Sean.





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    I think it sounds PERFECT! What do you feel is missing?! I don't know how you can make it any better!
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    I think the wording sounds great!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Honey3.14 View Post
    I really like it. And I may end up borrowing it, if it's okay with you, since Patricks birthday will be circus themed (yess there will be clowns involved for those of you afraid of clowns, I will put warnings)
    You should use Paper Dolls if you have it. They have great clown stuff and that is where I am getting the tent.
    Nancy
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    I do not have paper dolls but I do have excellent paper for a tent so I may ask to borrow someones cart or send them the paper to do it for me.....
    Erin~Mommy to Patrick and Sean.





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    Quote Originally Posted by sadieruth View Post
    I think it sounds PERFECT! What do you feel is missing?! I don't know how you can make it any better!
    My thoughts exactly. I even read it twice trying to find something missing.
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    Quote Originally Posted by MommyCB View Post
    My thoughts exactly. I even read it twice trying to find something missing.
    Ok, I guess it's fine. I just did it so quick it seemed like I was forcing it. It took forever to do T.J.'s invite last year, this year just seemed too easy. Then again, I am going for easy this year.

    Thanks for the complements!
    Nancy
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    I love it. Its super cute! I cant wait to see the pics of the invites!

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