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I'd love some suggestions for this page. I like the papers and pictures as they are, but I don't like the title and journaling very much. Any suggestions for different things I could do or add.

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Gosh, I would just keep it simple like that. I'm stumped, because I just like how that turned out. The pictures show up really well. I tend to make my pages way too busy, and I'm trying hard to start simplifying them

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Thanks Charys!

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I like it just the way it is! Very well done! I love how she is placed on the top right. Super cute!

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I love the layout, the pictures and the paper they way they are!!! It may be because it is late, but my only suggestion is that the journaling and title are a little harder to read. They don't really stand out. Maybe you could try black to see if the journaling would pop. I love the way you were able to cut andrea out of the top picture! Hope that helps Smile

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I think it looks great, I agree with maybe a darker title or even making the title a little bigger.

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I made the title a tad bigger and darker, is that better or bigger?

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Very cute!! The pictures are adorable! I love her little swimsuit and hat Smile
The title is easier to read since you made it bigger, but I wonder what it would look like with the font in a different color? I would probably try a muted red somewhere in the shade range of your DH shorts. That might make it pop out more. But just a suggestion, because I think it looks great as is.
Nice page Smile

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thats a great page

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i like it as is! great job!

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I think it's really cute. If I were to add anything, it would be stickers of pool toys under the title (especially the ones you listed). Or if you have pictures of those things, silhouette them like you did with the top picture and put them under your title. But I think it really looks good the way it is too.

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The darker colored font did help. I think it looks great.