Okay, so I have the poem I'm putting inside.
January can be such fun
But its also hard to get things done
So this year we invite our friends
To celebrate in June instead.
But instead of gifts this year, we are asking for donations to the George Mark Childrens Residence for Terminally Ill children. We will have a box for all donations at the birthday party. Donations will be made in Patricks name.
So how would you word that above section? Is that okay?