Does the other page need more journaling or do you think it's OK plain?
Well look at you! You are even getting creative with you pics! I LOVE it! I downloaded the same kit. I really like it. I wasn't sure what to do with the pens, but I do now! Great job! I don't think you could have done them any better!
How cute! I love them! I dont think you need any writting on the second. It looks great.
those look great!!! wouldn't change a thing!
I love it. You did a great job. I especially like that you wrote the long journaling to describe the day.
looks great! and I think the one block of journaling is just perfect, I wouldn't add more.
Looks great! I don't think it needs anything else either.
I think it is wonderful and you don't need to change anything.
I agree, they both look great and I wouldn't change a thing! I especially like the selective coloring and blurring in the second one to make the birthday girl stand out.
I think it looks great