Tell me if this page is done? - Edited with final pic

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Tell me if this page is done? - Edited with final pic

Edit - Ok, so this is what I did to change it - thanks for all the ideas ladies!

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I think I've been staring at it too long ... is this page done? If not, what should I add? It's for the spring challenge.

ETA - do the bird and heart thing look silly?

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I love it but it would look good with some journaling in the lower right corner.

Jasmin is SUPPOSED to be sleeping but she said to add 3 daisy's in a row same kind you already have, to the lower right corner

Also maybe two staples right on the top of the flower stem?

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Jasmine Lee GO TO BED NOW!!!

(but wow, what a scrapper in training) I love her ideas.

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"Honey3.14" wrote:

Jasmine Lee GO TO BED NOW!!!

(but wow, what a scrapper in training) I love her ideas.

LOL!!!!

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Trina, from here it looks like your chick is being absorbed by one of the dots. Could you move him over or layer him to the front?

And adding something to the bottom right might be a nice touch. Try it out! I can't decide whether more chicks or flowers, though.

It's a beautiful page even without any tweaking! Smile

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i love it!

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I llove it... but I would add some journaling.. but other then that it looks good.

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It's definitely plainer than you normally do, but I really like it.

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PERFECT! That just completes it!

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I knew you'd work it out girl. Looks gorgeous. Love her toothy smile too...so cute.

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Wow, love your final product! Sorry I didn't get to this until just now, but you couldn't have done it better.

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LOVE it. The colors are amazing and so is the little designs all over!