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    here is a layout i did for jeena's first fingerpainting experience but i'm not sure the title is everything it could be!! change the title all together? the font? i don't know what to do with it!! help!!!

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    I would move the word "painting" to where "lol" is and remove "lol." Also, maybe make the letters bigger and just overlap them. Otherwise, I love the layout! And the pictures are so perfect.

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    I would change the title. something like "the world looks better in color ... green" or "coloring the world, one finger at a time"

    I know, a lot of letters in my suggestion, and you'd have to redo the page to really use something that long.


    maybe "finger painting fun" - to me the lol seems out of place. (and if you don't mind my suggesting it, the thumbtack should go - it doesn't seem to fit in with the rest of the page. it just struck me as being somewhat off when I first looked at the page. but you can also ignore me, cause it's after midnight and I'm super sleepy)
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    I am reading it as 'Finger Painting 101' is that right? Cause that's a super cute title!!

    If it is supposed to be 101, then I might change around 'painting' and '101' and use another font that makes the numbers look like numbers so that it's not mistaken for LOL.

    I think you did a fab job with it!!

    If you really want to look at other titles, this link has quite a few regarding art. Some of them are really cute!

    http://www.theperfecttitle.com/art/art.shtml

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    thanks for the suggestions.. i'll play around with it at jeena's naptime!

    the title is finger painting 101.. like a fingerpainting class... guess i should make it look more like numbers then
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    oh, that makes much more sense! and it's much cuter than "fingerpainting lol" ha ha ha ha I really wondered where you were going with that. but like I said, it was midnight when I replied to you and I was tired.


    in that case, I honestly think something like that would look better horizontal rather than vertical.
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    lol, ohhhh!! Wow, blonde moment. Or maybe I was tired? Ehh, excuses. lol! Well, fingerpainting 101 does make much more sense.

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    I think the way you have the pics laid out is adorable. I like how you have a lot of pics, but it isn't busy.

    The title. I find it a little hard to read as well. I think you should change the font to look more like numbers. I don't know about the vertical thing though. It confuses me, but I am EASILY confused!
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    i attempted to figure out the title during jeena's naptime.. just about had it done and i got an error message that said the program had an error and had to shut down... and i hadn't saved it in awhile...grrr!!! so i'll have to attempt it again soon...
    Delia - Mama (homebirthing, breastfeeding, cosleeping, baby wearing, cloth diapering type of a Mama!) to
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    Ohh, I hate it when that happens.

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