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Will you peek?

I plan to do an update thread here tomorrow (as I have to share a couple projects plus the haul I got at Jo-Anns today, awesome stuff!) but first I wanted to get some feedback. I spent a good part of yesterday working on my photography website. I just wanted to know if anything stuck out as needing a change. I can't move the "About Me" section ... at least not easily. That's the one thing I wish I had done differently (put it before the Contact section). But other than that, how does this look for a starting point?

http://www.wix.com/gcustomphotography/home

Gonna post it on the photography board too, but I always go to you girls first. Wink Thanks!

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I think that looks great!!

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i think it looks amazing. i like the about me section where it is, because i want to know about you and your life before i look at your gallery. I want to be sure you arent "a bum who just wants money for booze" before i look further into your photography. Biggrin

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"iluvmygemini" wrote:

I want to be sure you arent "a bum who just wants money for booze" before i look further into your photography. Biggrin

ROFL Okay, good reason to keep it there!

Thanks for the kind words. Smile

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I think it looks great!
I did notice two wording things though. On the home page it says you are 'based in the Ashburn, VA' take out the 'the' and it's perfect:)
The other one was on your About Me page. I feel like it should say "We're not lacking for pictures" instead of 'of'. Does that make sense? That's just my 2 cents. I love the simple design, and LOVE the pictures!!!

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"pickle in middle" wrote:

I think it looks great!
I did notice two wording things though. On the home page it says you are 'based in the Ashburn, VA' take out the 'the' and it's perfect:)
The other one was on your About Me page. I feel like it should say "We're not lacking for pictures" instead of 'of'. Does that make sense? That's just my 2 cents. I love the simple design, and LOVE the pictures!!!

thanks Lena! Fixed the "the" ... and the lacking of/for is a good point. I kept the for in for now, because I feel like that sounds okay. But maybe you're right about the "of". Will have to play that in my head a few times. Smile

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I think it looks great!!

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LOVE it! I really love your business name and logo. I've seen it before, but looks fantastic there. Smile Good job girl!!

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I am impressed with how professional it looks. Very nice Gwen. I loved browsing your gallery. Man, I wish you could take pics of my family girl!!!